10, Ahmed
Orabi Street ,
9th July 2016
Dear
Tom,
It pleases me so much to write this
letter to you. How are you? I hope you are fine Would you like to visit Egypt next
month. It is really my pleasure to invite you to visit our beloved home, Egypt . You will
enjoy your time here. We will go north to see Alexandria ,
the bride of the Mediterranean Sea . We will
visit the most charming places you have never seen before. If we go south, you
will see one of the richest cities in the world, Luxor . luxor
is the city that has one third of the world's monuments. We will enjoy seeing a
lot of museums, statues, antiquities and ancient treasures. I will show you the
history of our ancestors, the Pharaohs. I will be so glad if you accept my
invitation. Bye for now.
Yours sincerely ,
Hassan
Good, but there are some errors in your punctuation marks. Notice the following:
ReplyDelete1-I hope you are fine. Would you like to visit Egypt next month?
2- Luxor is the city t